Some of you might still remember my recent posts here. I've just crated a brand new profile at fiance.com, and if somebody is interested they can go check it out. The ID # is 75292. I would REALLY appreciate any coments. Thanks beforehand!
Good to see your profile:)) but there seems be be a big mistake!!!!!!
It was all good until I got to the end and saw you have cut me out of your age
criterior:((( I know there is a few years between us but I dont think we should dwell on such small things. Besides I can do some things better than boy. What woman wants is a man.)))
Welcome back!! :)) Hope your exams at school went well. Guess it's party time now, huh. Did you want me to bring
white or red???? I am definately going to check your profile and give you some comments.
Happy New Year and Merry Christmas!!
Masha, check the thread "New Year", my last post!!! Pretty close, huh!!!!!
You can be calm, because I am not boy. I am twice 25 :))
Seriously. You asked for comment on your profile, so I will venture into dangerous territory
If I was looking at your profile, it would be very interesting for me to know that you are now sitting Scholarship, so that you will be able to complete your Masters in NZ. It sets you apart from all the others, in a good way.
When you are at University in NZ, you will make many friends there. I would put limits on your criterior and pitch your profile directly at them.
Also, you are a very attractive girl:)) and it would be great if you could add some western style photos.
I am sure this is no help what soever:))
Yay! Some criticism!! That's what I was waiting for.
Thanks for good advice, I'll add some information to my profile. I've been thinking about doing that already.
What do you mean by "western style photos"?
All right, I know I don't have the best pictures in the profile, but I really have NO TIME to have new ones taken:((( Maybe when my winter break starts. Until then, please make sure that I understand what "western style" means:)
Anyways, you WERE able to notice I am an attractive girl. Isn't that enough? I guess it isn't.
What do you mean " western style photo" ?? I am puzzled.
Do you want Masha in a skimpy bikini?? Or with in a cowboy hat, tight jeans, boots and swinging a lasso?
You get this Masha????
BmrI8
Youve been watching Jessica Simpson in that bikini and cowboy hat, havent you:)))
Its a great look but not quite what I had in mind.
Masha
I think in the west we are a lot more open.
A nice easy smile can add a lot.
It can be very suble. Thats why a photographer will take 100 shots and use 1.
(2)The photos appear to have been taken during your high school years, and it gives me the impression that you are a girl as opposed to a woman/young lady;
(3) In the large photo, which should be your best, you look annoyed, sulky and somewhat disinterested, as if you were not taking this process seriously;
(4) Your profile photo is nothing more than a mug shot; You should've included a photo of yourself in a nice dress or a business suit; Show your potential; At 5-7 and 117, you should have a great figure. No need to reveal T-n-A though;
(5) The photo of you sitting on a pier is probably the worst photo; Very blury; You claim to
(10)enjoy the water, but that photo does not express it;
(6) Your gray attire matches the sour expression on your face and the bluriness of the photos; In other words, the photos do not project warmth;
(7) The ponytail also makes you appear young and immature;
(8) With respect to your hobbies, do not use the word "partying;" Most of then men responding are going to be serious in their search for a spouse or scammers; The serious men will not respond; You'll get burned by the scammers;
(9) The other words I'd toss are "eating out;" This can be intrepreted as you do not like to cook. I'd just leave it out all together;
(10) Write something like: "I enjoy exercising and outdoor activities such as camping, sailing and jet-skiing. I also enjoy painting, cartooning and reading; My favorite artist is ________ and my favorite author is ____________;
(11) Do you have geographic preferences? If so, reveal it upfront; No need to waste your time or the time of any prospective mate;
That's it for now.
No offense intended. Just trying to bring out your potential so you could find the best possible mate.
(2) Masha is a very young looking gal( can't help that...good genes)
(3) At best a personal view .Yes a smile would have been nice.
(4) I'm more interested in what is said not seen
(5) I agree
(6) I do not see it
(7) I like the ponytail,young yes, immature..a stretch
(8) It is what it is....honesty is most important
(9) I like eating out!
(10) ?????? Picky, she will never impress you Moscow
(11) No preferences listed....which means there is none
(12) Moscow some of your critique is sound but much is petty, I'm sure Masha is trying to be upfront and honest.
Some women like substance over appearance.
Beemer, no offense but your thoughts of my opinion are irrelevant. It's Masha that's seeking a husband. She sent out the solicitation for comments. I'm only expressing MY opinion, which is based solely on my standards. If your standards are different, than that's fine. We can agree to disagree.
We both know that the English language is not Masha's native tongue. I'm only suggesting that her word selection may have been incorrect. For all we know, she may have meant "sociable." By using the word "partying," she may have inadvertantly turned away her Mister Right. So, it may not be what is is.
The fact that Masha has asked for independent opinions impresses me. It tells me that she's an open-minded, honest, and intelligent person who's seeking to better herself. She's also pretty. It's how she packages herself that counts. And I don't mind providing her with my input.
If you want to talk substance, show me a picture of yourself dating an obese Russian woman. Then we'll talk substance...
I wouldn't be scared by your "partying", but English isn't my first language either, so I can be missing some subtleties.
To a careful profile browser, who patiently looks at your photos and notices you are 170cm, 53kg, you will obviously appear as a very attractive girl.
But many of us will agree that not all men are careful and patient in their search, and a nice photo or, even better, a knock-out photo is, de facto, the most important thing by far in a girl's profile. Many of your competitors had their photos taken by professional photographers. They are likely outclassing you by number of letters received, not because they are more interesting or beautiful than you are, but because their photos are nicer.
Unfortunately for me, I am cut out of your age parameters by a couple of years :-(
Thanks for your input. We agree to disagree, it's a matter of personal opinion. And I'm sure she will respect
both of our thoughts. I personally like candid none professional pictures because when you meet the girl she will
never look as nice as her pictures.
If you look at my letter.....I said 'Some women like substance over appearence" I'm not a women. I KNOW
men put appearence over substance and I'll admit it's nice to see a pretty face. That pretty face in a few years
won't be the same so you better hope there is substance too.
Hi Masha
Your profile is good and to the point, if your main picture had a slight smile it would be even better. As a student you should enjoy partying so don’t change that!
I am within your age parameters just, and might send you a letter!